new song ish

[cream123]

link

thoughts?

[cream123]

not done yet btw, but any thoughts?

[everdrone]

wow! your vocals sound the best here I think as of yet, Doors like.

drums need to be more present and complex though, seems to be one loop and the chorus is over the one music loop, bass and song structure maybe

[cream123]

thanks man. Its a work in progress as stated. Appreciate the constructive criticism

[cream123]

bump

[innerdreamrecords.co]

It does have a Doors vibe. The good thing is your vocal pitch sounds better. I would suggest using less reverb and add a delay instead or use both, try a plate reverb for vocals or mix a plate and a room/hall reverb. Also, compress the vocals more.

[cream123]

thx for the tips