Nuclear Desert/I Know You Pt 2

[cream123]

its a bit rough but I thought I'd get a few opinions


http://soundcloud.com/marctron/nuclear-desert-i-know-you-pt-2

Let me know what ya'll think.

[cream123]

Lyrics:

Its where I found nature
and a sense of myself
Its when I looked out that window
and plunged into hell

Well you can't see the scars
because they're engraved into my soul
but for every action, theres a reaction
This I know is true

But I'm just two soldiers
in a war on my
self medicating nature
well won't you help me

Ash me, cash me
burn me to the ground
don't you forget we built up
walls around this town

and run, run, run
yeah we try to escape
from all the things about ourselves
that we hate

And as my flame was dwindling,
I had laid there forever
with viscous liquid whispers
spoken broken and clever

Its the diamond mines,
well they're just carbon under pressure
but for some reason,
humanity sees this as lesser

Its a nuclear desert
a mirror shattered and dismembered
its where atoms are split
and are never remembered

And our reflection found
in the morning dew
Brought a light to the gap
the gap between me and you

and I know, yeah I know
that you're just confused
yeah I know
I know you

Yeah I know, I know you

[TheLivingDead]

I loved this.

Get on that album, boy!

[crusty philtrum]

Bew-di-ful ! I love how your stuff is kinda effortlessly joyous and melancholy at the same time, in a natural way. Always a complete pleasure to listen to.

[cream123]

Bew-di-ful ! I love how your stuff is kinda effortlessly joyous and melancholy at the same time, in a natural way. Always a complete pleasure to listen to.

Man, I always appreciate the kind words. its nice to know that you enjoy the music I make. There will be a real drummer on this hopefully tonight.

I loved this.

Get on that album, boy!

Working on it! Thanks for the kind words