i'm fiddling with this melody line the whole week and this is the best i could come up with =/ i fear my technical knowledge is pulling me down (well.. i KNOW this is the case)
just a quick recording with octaves.
apart of that, i'm in a total creativity hole ... i dont want to use the same drum pattern for the whole song (albeit i could fit/arrange the riffs around it, but i dont want to.. cos it has no variety and is boring to listen to the same **** over and over for 3+ minutes)
and i want to expand the song with more stuff (at least one bit with a solo) but i dont want it to sound forced
link to clip
if anybody into this... i'm open to suggestions =/